Pretty Crazy

Not really much left for me to say except that I liked this too. To be honest, there are a lot of bitter-orphan kid stories right now on YWS. Two ...

Hey this is pretty neat. It's short, yeah, but the structure is good. I like the quirkiness of it. It could almost be a song, you know? Good work. Love ...

Okay, first I would like to say something that's really important to getting people to read this whole thing. Layout. You need to make it easy-looking to read. Otherwise people ...

Hello, I haven't read the previous chapters, but I liked this just as well. You did a good job showing each of their feelings and emotions. The exorcist Dad is ...

Good day, I agree with seeminglymeanless, this is a terrifyingly large post! Really, it would be so much better if you posted the parts separately. Now, I only got to ...

Hey fellow dragon lover! Alright, first of all it was a bit confusing. I'm still not quite sure what's going on, or rather, why this is happening. Could you work ...

I love the urgency of this. Like when the father tells her to run. It is a little bit sightly cliche, however. I have read books before where the parents ...

Okay, I'm dying to know more. You started this story in such an un-cliche way that I couldn't get enough. Your descriptions were pretty much perfect, and not at all ...

It was sweet but a little pointless. The first chapter should intrigue the reader, that doesn't necessarily mean starting off with a car chase or whatever. The point is, let ...

I liked it. It's creative and in-depth character-wise. Poor Generator. All he wanted was to please the Master. Sometimes the best stories are the ones that come purely from the ...

Another dragon story, yay! Okay, first of all, it's an interesting idea. But it was a bit too fast and confusing. We don't know anything about this world yet because ...

Hello, I don't really have time to do a long review, but it's always nice just to let the writer know that you liked it, right? So that's why I'm ...

Okay. Interesting concept. I love stories with super powers in them. But really, nothing happened here. What you took a whole chapter to do (introduce the twins, Bell doesn't want ...

To be honest, I skipped a lot of this. It got a little boring towards the middle. However, the mysterious boy watching them picked things up a bit. I would ...

Very interesting. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. ;) I think the others have just about covered the nitpicks. So I'm going to not do any. By the ...